Does this blurb make my book look good? Or bad? – The Realm of Misleading Book Descriptions

Filed in The Geeky Lover Posted on February 23, 2011 @ 7:00 am 27 comments

Today I noticed something rather disturbing. A book description that actually tells false facts about a book. This really disturbed me because this isn’t only bad for us as the readers, it can actually also really hurt the author.

What if the blurb says something that makes the book look like something it isn’t? Let’s take a look at the offending part of the description I’m talking about:

“In Minneapolis, Maggie heads to a restaurant with her sister, only to find Mace waiting. Worse, she learns he’ll soon be her brother-in-law.


Stuck in her sister’s apartment with Mace, Maggie offers him one night of sex, anything goes. No obligations, no recriminations. Mace agrees…he wants more than Maggie’s body, he wants her heart. “
I loved this book but I have to admit I never actually read the blurb before I started reading. So I never realized that it actually says that Maggie has no-strings-attached sex with her soon-to-be brother in law. And the worst thing is: she doesn’t! She actually makes that offer to to the brother of her sister’s fiancé and yes I know in the sense of the word that still makes him her brother in law but ask yourself: did you think about the “scandalous” possibility first, too? I really don’t like that things like this happen. Even more because I realized today that Julia probably lost sales because of this “wrong” blurb. I already heard of potential readers today who said they didn’t buy the book because the blurb made it into one of their pet-peeves. And I can understand that. I would have thought the same. (Note: I told the author and I have to say I’m positively surprised because the publisher reacted really fast and changed the description ASAP- no more cheating in the blurb.)
So this made me think: does this actually happen more than I thought it would? And when I started to ask readers they said yes- they noticed this too from time to time. Here’s another example:

In the Tudor Court of 1518, your friends and enemies can be one and the same…During the annual celebration of the Order of the Garter, Sir Michael Devereaux arrives in King Henry VIII’s court on a mission for his benefactor. The celebration’s endless feats and sumptuous women delight the charismatic newcomer, who becomes captivated by the enigmatic Princess Renee of France. But evil, it seems, has followed Michael to the court. Shortly after his arrival, an unknown killer claims several victims, including the Queen’s lady-in-waiting, and the powerful Cardinal Wolsey asks Michael to help with the investigation. As he searches for the killer, Michael is haunted by disturbing images of the victims – flashes of violence that lead him to doubt his own sanity. Michael soon realizes that the key to solving the crime is connected to both the Pope’s Imperial vault in Rome and a mystery from Michael’s own past – revealing a secret that is so damning, it could forever alter the future of mankind.

Does anything in this blurb make you think this book has vamps and romance in it? For me it sounds like a historical novel with some mystery in it.

Another bad example is The Night Villa by Carol Goodman. The main characters name was seriously wrong on the back cover blurb. It said Cory instead of Sophie. Bad editing? How does this happen?

But the list goes on: On Jane Evanovich’s jacket flap of Sizzling Sixteen a scene about Vinnie “running up pay-per-view porn charges in Ranger’s apartment” is mentioned that doesn’t occur in the whole novel. This one caused more than one complain on the amazon hyvemind aka the message-boards

So what does this tell us? Should we judge a book by its description? 
And if we can’t, how should we know if this book could be something we would enjoy reading?
Do you know any other examples for misleading blurbs?

About Susi


Susi is a geeky vegetarian from Gemany. She just finished university and now works as a civil engineer in steel construction. Besides her reading addiction she also knits like a maniac while listening to audiobooks. Susi also blogs at the Secret HEA Society.

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  • Blodeuedd February 23, 2011 at 7:08 am

    Oh blurbs, they can suck so badly sometimes. Yes I have come across books that I have thought was one thing but showed to be something else entirely.

    Not far at all. A reader buys a book excepting a storyline and if it's not there, well buuu blurbs

  • Ricki February 23, 2011 at 8:38 am

    I had read Royal Blood thinking it was historical mystery/suspense and was incredibly disappointed when it turned out they were vampires.

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 23, 2011 at 9:34 am

    @Blodeuedd Yes I hate when that happens. That's one of teh reasons why I usually don't read them. Mostly buy on rec basis cuz here the booksotres rarely have something I would buy on impulse.

    @Ricki I can imagine that this was frustrating. I once thought a book to be PNR and than it was UF. O_o I read both genres but still it irked me!

  • Alisha (MyNeedToRead) February 23, 2011 at 9:47 am

    Indeed, blurbs can be a slippery slope. I've come across a couple that only slightly misrepresent what's actually contained in the book.

    One that sticks in my mind was the blurb for "Blood of the Demon" by Diana Rowland. It was really just one part of one line…"Between heaven and hell, man and demon, she’s about to face the one thing she may not be able to survive." The italicized bit caught my attention because the "demons" of this series (as well as where they reside) has nothing at all do to with heaven/hell…that point is make exceedingly clear a number of times in the first two books. Not a big huge deal, but the innocuous phrasing makes incorrect implications. IMO.

    That all said…I'll bet blurb writing ain't easy. One has to write a description to appeal to a specific (or broad-as-possible) audience. Slippery slope, I say. Slippery slope.

  • draconismoi February 23, 2011 at 9:52 am

    It's terrible! First you realize the the bulk of book covers (at least US book covers) have almost nothing to do with the book itself….and then the blurbs mislead you. Makes browsing damn difficult.

  • Bethany C. February 23, 2011 at 9:57 am

    I've never come across glaring errors like that, but my blurb pet peeve is when the plot sounds amazing and the book turns out to be nothing but sex sex and more sex. I know some people read for that, but I think it should be pretty obvious that that's what the book is really about. Don't lure me in with the promise of a great story, then attempt to impress me with how many metaphors you can come up with for body parts- because I promise, I won't be impressed.

  • GeishasMom73 February 23, 2011 at 10:11 am

    As a reader it sucks when the blurb doesn't describe the actual contents of the book. I can't imagine how terrible it is for an author who spent months, maybe years, writing a story that is misrepresented by the blurb. I'm not sure how this happens. It seems obvious that some of the blurb/back cover writers didn't read the books first. Sad really.

    Stacie
    GeishasMom73 on twitter

  • Julia Rachel Barrett February 23, 2011 at 10:20 am

    I have to tell you all that I so appreciate Susi pointing out the mistake in the blurb, because once I approve the blurb/proof, I assume it will be loaded as is – sometimes mistakes are made, words are dropped, blurbs are shortened, that kind of thing. I've been out of town since I found out the book was releasing early and I did not re-read the blurb.
    I notified Siren the minute Susi told me, and they had the blurb corrected within three minutes! You cannot imagine how amazing that feels to know that as an author, you're not left hanging while readers are getting the wrong idea about your story!

  • Angelina Rain February 23, 2011 at 10:39 am

    Oh no, I hate it when that happens. I’m glad the first book you mentioned got a new blurb. I would have never picked it up with that blurb.

    I’ve recently read one book that highly disappointed me. The blurb led me to believe it was a contemporary erotic romance with a strong heroine and an alpha hero. Instead, what it contained was an alcoholic doormat who believed all her problems could be solved with sex, and a sexist pig who despite his dream woman being raped by another man, all he wanted to do was have sex with her. And the biggest problem with that story was despite all the mentions of sex there really wasn’t much of it in the book. There were only a few sex scenes near the end and even those were tame in terms of an erotica.

  • Angela (Library Girl Reads) February 23, 2011 at 11:10 am

    Great topic!

    I can't remember a specific example of this with a book off the top of my head but sometimes the blurbs about movies on Netflix are really off. There was one movie that I got where the title made so much more sense after watching it because the description was totally wrong!

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 23, 2011 at 11:57 am

    @Alisha I know what you mean- I can be picky about small things like that too. And indeed a slippery slope. LOL

    @draconismoi Exactly. How should we see if it's something for us?

    @Bethany C. I admit I like to read erotica BUT it needs to have some solid story around it and a good erotica is erotic cuz of the emotion behind the sex. Just sex is boring!

    @Stacie That's what I mean. It's really bad news for the author when the readers feel cheated cuz of the wrong blurb. Even though the author's aren't even the ones to blame.

    @Julia You really got a good publisher there. I was so amazed that they reacted that fast. And yes you are right. Mistakes happen- we are all just human.

    @Angelina Yes, that really made so angry cuz I loved that book. And got I hate when that happens. And yes I hate when I want to read an erotica and what I actually get is the Morning after kind of book.

    @Angela Yes I think this applies to movies too. Sometimes I wonder how they can someone write a blurb who doesn't seem to have the faintest idea about what happens in the book or movie.

  • Sullivan McPig February 23, 2011 at 2:51 pm

    The one example I can think of is 'The Lord Protector's Daughter' by Modesitt. It mentions something as a crucial plotpoint on the blurb which actually happens in the last chapter or second to last.

  • Chelsea B. February 23, 2011 at 3:31 pm

    Ugh. I hate when things like that happen. And with all the stupid things people are suing over lately, I can't believe someone hasn't tried to pocket some money via these 😉

  • Jackie February 23, 2011 at 3:47 pm

    This has only happened to me once. But, it was more a problem with a summary I found at Barnes and Noble than what the book's summary was, I think. I picked up Beautiful Stranger by Hope Donahue thinking it was a memoir of a girl with an eating disorder; that's what the blip from B&N alluded to. It ended up being about a girl who was addicted to plastic surgery. While it ended up being an alright book, I had no desire to read about plastic surgery. Not really my cuppa tea.

  • Blodeuedd February 23, 2011 at 4:03 pm

    I finished a book today..yup and with a bad blurb, noticed it now later. It said that they will band together to save king and crown…yeah no. They spent time in bed and chasing each other. No kingdom saving

  • Sarah February 23, 2011 at 4:47 pm

    I've noticed this too and it can totally throw me out of the story. Case in point: Kathleen Dante's books make no mention that the world has magic in it/the h/h can perform magic so when I read the first one, I thought I wasn't reading it correctly when I first encountered magic because it was so subtle and it took awhile to adjust my perceptions of the world/what was going on. If it'd been mentioned on the back, not only would it have made me even more eager to read them but I would have accepted it much more readily!

    PS I'll definitely be buying Barrett's book now that I know there's no cheating – that's definitely one of my no-go topics in books.

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  • ASHLEY HOLT February 23, 2011 at 10:01 pm

    WOW FORTUNELY I HAVE NOT COME UPON ANY BOOKS LIKE THAT BUT YEAH CHEATING IS A PET PEEVE OF MINE ITS A REALLY BIG MISTAKE ON THE EDITING PROCESS AND THANK GOSH THEY RESPONDED AND CHANGED IT.

    WHY LIE IF YOU WANT YOUR BOOK TO SOUND MORE INTERESTING MAKE A MORE INTERESTING BOOK!!!

  • JenM February 23, 2011 at 11:36 pm

    I have to say, I was quite surprised when I read the original blurb for Julia's book. It probably wouldn't have stopped me from reading it, but I know that cheating is a hot button topic for many readers and I thought that she was really limiting her audience by having the heroine proposition her sister's fiance. I'm relieved to find out that it was the brother of her sister's fiance that she was getting involved with. That's much more normal.

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 24, 2011 at 12:33 am

    @Sullivan McPig That actually reminds on that Kristan Higgins book pattepoilue told me about. With the puppy on the cover and no puppy in the book. Now that I wrote it down it doesn't sound so the same but it'S early 😉

    @Chelsea B. That's a thought. LOL

    @Jackie Dang okay so that is really something they shouldn't mistake for each other.

    @Blodeuedd Okay so that is wrong. Perhaps they thought it would make the book sound more fantasy? I really wonder what they want to achieve with that.

    @Sarah Oh I hate when that happens. Same for me when they put in the wrong genre shelf. Really irks me.

    @Ashley Yes it should be easy like that. Even though the bad books need a blurb too. =P

    @JenM Exactly. It's wrong to put a conflict there that will actually scare readers away. But they fixed it. Go Siren Bookstrand!

  • Sheree February 24, 2011 at 2:13 am

    I've encountered blurbs that were misleading, not out-right wrong. Good thing I didn't pick the books due to their blurbs but their authors.

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 24, 2011 at 2:53 am

    @Sheree I have some of those auto buy authors too but for the new ones I mostly go with recs from trusted reviewers.

  • Bea February 24, 2011 at 5:10 pm

    I don't think I've encountered any blurbs that were flat out wrong but misleading – oh yes. I sometimes feel as if all book blurbs are wrong. When it's a new to you author or series, a misleading blurb can make or break a book. Frustrating.

    Julie, I am so glad that you listened to Susi and that your publisher listened to you. To lose sales because of a blurb would be so infuriating, I would think.

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 25, 2011 at 12:42 am

    @Bea Yes I agree. A new series can really be harmed by this. And yes Julia is really lucky. =)

  • Stella (Ex Libris) February 25, 2011 at 6:58 am

    Wow, you are totally right Susi, I agree on both accounts (who would ever suspect Royal Blood to be paranormal? I get that maybe they want to really surprise the reader when it is revealed the evil is a vamp, but I'm sure it will put off more historical readers this way..) And the Julia Barrett novel: oh my, I completely understood she was going to have sex with the fiance of her sister! Which as a sister I can absolutely not understand! That breaches everything: the bond, the trust between sisters. Poor Julia, I can well imagine many readers decided against buying this book, because based on this blurb I sure wouldn't give it a try and might miss out on a great story 🙁

    In my opinion deciding whether to read or not a book based on the blurb doesn't go in the category of 'judging a book by its cover'. In my opinion the blurb has to be true to the story and should also give a first taste of what the reader can expect. And I think truthfulness to the story is a must.

  • Birgit February 25, 2011 at 7:55 am

    Oh I hate when that happens! Sometimes it seems like they put the blurb on the wrong book while at other times they leave out vital information.
    Take Nora Robert's "Morrigan's Cross" for example – no hint whatsoever that it's about vampires (at least not on the german version I read)! That was a nasty surprise for someone who tries to stay away from the whole vampire hype.

  • natalie23 February 27, 2011 at 7:48 am

    I really hate it when they write the blurbs wrong like that, but it's great that they changed it as soon as they were notified.
    It does make me wonder how many books I would have enjoyed, but have never read because of the blurb.

  • SusiSunshine {The Geeky Bookworm} February 27, 2011 at 12:31 pm

    @Stella Yes I agree it actually the way you should be able to judge if you like a book. It'S rather disappointing that it seems to be wrong so often.

    @Birgit I think the Germans are even worse with writing Blurbs. For example all the Wächter books by Lukyanenko have the same one. O_o

    @natalie23 Yes I agree. It seems Siren Bookstrand is one gem of a publisher.

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